Post by Nina on Aug 13, 2009 20:33:56 GMT -6
To Explain: I posted this at an RP site I quit, because I was sick of it for several reasons. All are explained in the OOC below, but one I didn't mention was waiting a month for a two sentence reply. Please enjoy the humor!
Suddenly, Chase grabbed his chest as a searing pain ripped through him. His heart was throbbing, pounding painfully in his chest. He choked for breath and couldn't understand what was happening as his body spasmed with wave after wave of such an unfamiliar sensation.
He was immortal, he was a demi-god, yet he was dieing.
He fell to the rocky, sandy ground in front of Guan, clawing at the dry soil with his other hand in aggravation of falling before an opponent. As soon as it had begun, Chase fell flat, dead before he fully realized it. The impact sent up a small cloud of sand which stuck to his face and hair. Amazingly, the century old warrior was defeated, without anyone laying a blow.
Elsewhere, a young Japanese man with brown hair chuckled darkly as he watched the ink dry on the page. The name read Chase Young. He thought to himself about the almost mythological man who would now be experiencing his final moments. An immortal warrior without a soul, and the second greatest evil the world never knew existed.
"If you wanna take the deal, Raito, you could get the world's greatest evil." A shodow crooned, offer punctuated with the crunching of an apple.
"I'll have Misa observe Hannibal Roy Bean later." Raito replied, dismissing his companion.
((OOC- Ok, so maybe this will be in bad humor to some(probably all) of you. It was, however, very much in mine and I wanted to go out with a bang. (I feel like quoting the Joker, but I'll hold it in.)
This sis ridiculous, but when I joined I thought- "An rp with no posting requirements will be fun. I'm used to limits and requirements, so none will be a break from that and time just to enjoy the basics." But it's not. I can't help it, as a "grammar nazi" I cringe at every misuse of their/they're/there, or you're/your I see. But I hold it in because I don't really know anyone here, and don't want to be the local forum bee.(Though this will probably make me so to everyone.) It doesn't help that when I'm online no one else is.
My second reason for this, is that it's ridiculous to leave out all the detail and senses characters experience, as though I'm not playing another person at all. I want to include the sensations, feelings and surroundings, but it makes me feel like a stuck up bimbo to do so when no one else does. To me, I am that character when I rp and leaving it out is like I'm living without ever experiencing the 5 senses.
I understand you all have dealt with a few Youngs leaving before, and I'm sorry to do it to you again, but I just can't enjoy this. I want to, because I love Xiaolin Showdown and an rp just made me remember how much I miss watching it. I just can't enjoy it here. I understand that my account will be deleted and I'm fine with that. Good luck with getting a new Chase.))
He was immortal, he was a demi-god, yet he was dieing.
He fell to the rocky, sandy ground in front of Guan, clawing at the dry soil with his other hand in aggravation of falling before an opponent. As soon as it had begun, Chase fell flat, dead before he fully realized it. The impact sent up a small cloud of sand which stuck to his face and hair. Amazingly, the century old warrior was defeated, without anyone laying a blow.
Elsewhere, a young Japanese man with brown hair chuckled darkly as he watched the ink dry on the page. The name read Chase Young. He thought to himself about the almost mythological man who would now be experiencing his final moments. An immortal warrior without a soul, and the second greatest evil the world never knew existed.
"If you wanna take the deal, Raito, you could get the world's greatest evil." A shodow crooned, offer punctuated with the crunching of an apple.
"I'll have Misa observe Hannibal Roy Bean later." Raito replied, dismissing his companion.
((OOC- Ok, so maybe this will be in bad humor to some(probably all) of you. It was, however, very much in mine and I wanted to go out with a bang. (I feel like quoting the Joker, but I'll hold it in.)
This sis ridiculous, but when I joined I thought- "An rp with no posting requirements will be fun. I'm used to limits and requirements, so none will be a break from that and time just to enjoy the basics." But it's not. I can't help it, as a "grammar nazi" I cringe at every misuse of their/they're/there, or you're/your I see. But I hold it in because I don't really know anyone here, and don't want to be the local forum bee.(Though this will probably make me so to everyone.) It doesn't help that when I'm online no one else is.
My second reason for this, is that it's ridiculous to leave out all the detail and senses characters experience, as though I'm not playing another person at all. I want to include the sensations, feelings and surroundings, but it makes me feel like a stuck up bimbo to do so when no one else does. To me, I am that character when I rp and leaving it out is like I'm living without ever experiencing the 5 senses.
I understand you all have dealt with a few Youngs leaving before, and I'm sorry to do it to you again, but I just can't enjoy this. I want to, because I love Xiaolin Showdown and an rp just made me remember how much I miss watching it. I just can't enjoy it here. I understand that my account will be deleted and I'm fine with that. Good luck with getting a new Chase.))