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Post by →izzehkins← on Feb 15, 2010 5:31:49 GMT -6
[atrb=width,450,true][atrb=border,0,true][bg=000000]
blah blah blah blah blah "speech and stuffs" blah blah blah blah yeah. i made her a table. just in case. i have a solution if i don't win - eat the winner. just kidding. i think. anyway. i'm not putting this in the testing thing cause i want critique on it. please? help me out here, cause i think it's good but i want opinions so i can make it better. help me?
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Post by →izzehkins← on Feb 17, 2010 22:04:53 GMT -6
aww, no one wants to help an izzy out? D:
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Post by pan on Feb 18, 2010 10:42:10 GMT -6
Mmm. Pan says: Move the words on the original image down and crop off as much black space on the bottom as possible so there is not so much empty black space?
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Post by →izzehkins← on Feb 18, 2010 17:25:24 GMT -6
[atrb=width,450,true][atrb=border,0,true][bg=000000]
blah blah blah blah blah "speech and stuffs" blah blah blah blah yeah. i made her a table. just in case. i have a solution if i don't win - eat the winner. just kidding. i think. anyway. i'm not putting this in the testing thing cause i want critique on it. please? help me out here, cause i think it's good but i want opinions so i can make it better. help me?
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?? like so? i had to make the pic bigger cause i want the knife in it, and in this version you actually can see it better...but good lord that image is huge. |
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Post by ADMIN ACCOUNT on Feb 18, 2010 21:29:09 GMT -6
I like the old version better tbh, and Pan makes a very good point with the large amounts of black. I'm not one for women in nothing but their bras either, or with high contrast like that, but the bloody heart is really cool <3 I think my biggest issue is how dark the text is. Her name should stand out a bit more, and I dunno if you want the red curly letters to be hardly readable or not? That's all your choice as an artist.
So, keep the smaller version, and make her name a bit brighter essentially ^^ <33
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Post by →izzehkins← on Feb 18, 2010 23:37:32 GMT -6
hmm...why do you like the smaller one better? cause i'm trying to kind of merge them together, and i wanted to see if i could do that and keep what you liked about the first one. cause i agree with both of you - too much black space.
and aww D: i love high contrast. it's great.
ps: i know, i'm not a big fan of women in their bras either. if it helps, she's wearing pajama pants xD and if you seriously disapprove, i can pull out the ole' perspective clone tool and paint her a shirt. might make everything else disappear so i don't have to do the gradient...interesting idea...
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